lorenzo- One line Authors story

Today we wrote a different kind of story. each line was written by a different person and no one knew what anyone els had written. here is my story.

I can see a poison ghost.

I am with James.

I can hear people talking.

I can smell rubbish.

I am in my rocket ship.

I am eating while I am dancing.

ICE CREAM COMETS

Yesterday we made ice cream comets. The things that you need to make ice cream comets are cones, chocolate ice cream and biscuit. The first thing that you need to do is put two packets of biscuit into a plastic bag and crush it up . After that you put it on a plate but we just put it on the biscuit rapper because Mr Marks forgot to bring a plate.


Then you put sprinkles in the biscuit. Next you get a cone and put a scoop of ice cream and go and dip it in the crushed up biscuits and the sprinkles. Now we made our own ice cream comets. After that I slurped my ice cream comet up.


Then I finished my ice cream. I had a sticky hand because the ice cream was melting and there was a big mess on the table. But I think Mr Marks cleaned the mess up.


I felt happy because it was cool making ice cream comets.

Favourite thing I did this term

The favorite thing that like doing at school. is when we go to Badminton and Aussie rules.In badminton they use a racket shuttle and a net. But what you play Aussie rules with a kiwi kick ball and four post.


But the best won that I like to play is Aussie rules. if you want to no how to play you have to listen to your coach. The kick is called drop punt and if you drop punt it thew the tallest goal post. You get six points and if you get thew sides won you get 1 point.


If you don't know how to play. You have hit the shuttle with the racket over the net. you can do back hand front hand under hand.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules.



They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over

When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that.

The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules.



They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over

When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that.

The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules. They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that. The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Cross Country

Did you know on Wednesday we had cross country? It was long, hard and uneven. We went for a walk, so that we would know the track when we run the real cross country.

We had an early lunch so we would be on time. The race started down at the Pt England reserve. The 11 years old ran first. We never ran at the same time because we all might trip up and might get hurt. Then the 10 years old ran and the 9 years old ran last.

There were some intermediate students that held up signs and told us where to go. When I was running I heard some of them saying “go Lorenzo, go Lorenzo”. I was running and It smelt. Some people thought it was dangerous but I never thought it wasn't dangerous for me.

I made it to the bridge and gave up. I was walking all the way because I gave up. I saw bushes trees and big logs.

When I saw Mr Mark he was saying “go Lorenzo go Lorenzo, you can do it”, but I just kept on walking and he was still saying “go Lorenzo go Lorenzo”. I picked up a stick and walk all the way.

When I got to the end I felt happy because the race was over for me. I wasn't still fit though.