Tuesday, June 7, 2011

My holidays

On the first week of my holiday I stayed home with my mum dad and my brother and it was boring. My other two brothers went t my cousins house for the week.
On the second week I had much more fun. We went to the park with my mum, dad and my brother, it was awesome. On Friday my aunty took us to the mall to have dinner. But the best, best, best thing that I did was when we went to the movies. We saw ‘Fast and Furious Five’. I had never been to the movies before, I thought it was great and better than watching movies at home.


  1. Hey Lorenzo I like the way you used powerful words and I also like the way you put fullstops at the end of your sentences.

  2. Hey Lorenzo
    I like the way you put each week in to one whole story I've seen Fast and Furious 5 its the best.And I agree you used powerful words.

    Keep up the good work.

    Shayne :)