lorenzo- One line Authors story

Today we wrote a different kind of story. each line was written by a different person and no one knew what anyone els had written. here is my story.

I can see a poison ghost.

I am with James.

I can hear people talking.

I can smell rubbish.

I am in my rocket ship.

I am eating while I am dancing.

ICE CREAM COMETS

Yesterday we made ice cream comets. The things that you need to make ice cream comets are cones, chocolate ice cream and biscuit. The first thing that you need to do is put two packets of biscuit into a plastic bag and crush it up . After that you put it on a plate but we just put it on the biscuit rapper because Mr Marks forgot to bring a plate.


Then you put sprinkles in the biscuit. Next you get a cone and put a scoop of ice cream and go and dip it in the crushed up biscuits and the sprinkles. Now we made our own ice cream comets. After that I slurped my ice cream comet up.


Then I finished my ice cream. I had a sticky hand because the ice cream was melting and there was a big mess on the table. But I think Mr Marks cleaned the mess up.


I felt happy because it was cool making ice cream comets.

Favourite thing I did this term

The favorite thing that like doing at school. is when we go to Badminton and Aussie rules.In badminton they use a racket shuttle and a net. But what you play Aussie rules with a kiwi kick ball and four post.


But the best won that I like to play is Aussie rules. if you want to no how to play you have to listen to your coach. The kick is called drop punt and if you drop punt it thew the tallest goal post. You get six points and if you get thew sides won you get 1 point.


If you don't know how to play. You have hit the shuttle with the racket over the net. you can do back hand front hand under hand.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules.



They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over

When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that.

The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules.



They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over

When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that.

The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Aussie Rules

Did you know what we do ever Wednesday for this team. We have been playing Aussie rules have been learning the skills required to play Aussie rules. They play on an oval field with 4 goals. Do you know that when they play they have a small ball that looks the same as a rugby ball but it is small. What posters to they can kick the ball over When we go to Aussie rules they teach us one lesson at a time. I like the lesson when they teach me how to do the drop punt. I drop punted it to Frankie. But when it didn’t go to Frankie I wasn’t expecting that. The best thing that I like playing at Aussie rules Is when she is teaching us new games that we do not know. But some games, some people already know how to play.

Cross Country

Did you know on Wednesday we had cross country? It was long, hard and uneven. We went for a walk, so that we would know the track when we run the real cross country.

We had an early lunch so we would be on time. The race started down at the Pt England reserve. The 11 years old ran first. We never ran at the same time because we all might trip up and might get hurt. Then the 10 years old ran and the 9 years old ran last.

There were some intermediate students that held up signs and told us where to go. When I was running I heard some of them saying “go Lorenzo, go Lorenzo”. I was running and It smelt. Some people thought it was dangerous but I never thought it wasn't dangerous for me.

I made it to the bridge and gave up. I was walking all the way because I gave up. I saw bushes trees and big logs.

When I saw Mr Mark he was saying “go Lorenzo go Lorenzo, you can do it”, but I just kept on walking and he was still saying “go Lorenzo go Lorenzo”. I picked up a stick and walk all the way.

When I got to the end I felt happy because the race was over for me. I wasn't still fit though.

Spectacular New Zealand

The Rugby World Cup is bringing lots of tourists to New Zealand, but there is more here than just a Cup!


People in New Zealand

in New Zealand there are Maori people, that came to New Zealand first. There are heaps of other people that comes from other countries.

Unique animals native to New Zealand can be seen here. There is only one kiwi in New Zealand but some other country do not have a kiwi

So if you are here to see some of the 48 World Cup Rugby Games, remember to also take time out to inspect more of our stunning country

Spectacular New Zealand

The Rugby World Cup is bringing lots of tourists to New Zealand, but there is more here than just a Cup! People in New Zealand in New Zealand there are Maori people, that came to New Zealand first. There are heaps of other people that comes from other countries. Unique animals native to New Zealand can be seen here. There is only one kiwi in New Zealand but some other country do not have a kiwi So if you are here to see some of the 48 World Cup Rugby Games, remember to also take time out to inspect more of our stunning country

Spectaular New Zealand

xThe Rugby World Cup is bringing lots of tourists to New Zealand, but there is more here than just a Cup!


People in New Zealand

in New Zealand there are Maori people, that came to New Zealand first. There are heaps of other people that comes from other countries.

Unique animals native to New Zealand can be seen here. There is only one kiwi in New Zealand but some other country do not have a kiwi

So if you are here to see some of the 48 World Cup Rugby Games, remember to also take time out to inspect more of our stunning country
The Rugby World Cup is bringing lots of tourists to New Zealand, but there is more here than just a Cup!


People in New Zealand

in New Zealand there are Maori people, that came to New Zealand first. There are heaps of other people that comes from other countries.

Unique animals native to New Zealand can be seen here. There is only one kiwi in New Zealand but some other country do not have a kiwi

So if you are here to see some of the 48 World Cup Rugby Games, remember to also take time out to inspect more of our stunning country

Badminton

Every Thursday we go to badminton with Ms M after morning tea. Donna was teaching us how to hit the shuttle and serve the shuttle. Donna showed us some cool games like soccer and mini badminton. First we played the soccer game. You have to bat the shuttle to the other person and if he miss and it goes through the two cones that was on the side you get a point.

Next we played the game mini badminton. There was two mini badminton games. One was for the girls and the other one was for the boys. It was two on two. Me and Antonio was team mates, we versed the other team. They served the ball how Donna showed them to serve the ball. When I was about to hit the shuttle I aimed where I was going to hit the shuttle but they won. The next time we versed them me and Antonio won.

Yesterday we played 5 big badminton games. There was three mini badminton games and one big one. On the three small ones you had to do back hand and the second you have to do fore hand and on the third one you have to do side hand and on the big badminton court you could hit it which ever way you wanted to. This time it was me and Howard, we played on the big badminton court first. We swapped to the next one then we just did the same thing.

painting on cotton

I am finish painting on cotton, now I need to sew

My cushion

This is my picture of a car for my cushion painted to practice on paper

Lorenzo goes swimming

Basketball

Every Wednesday we go to the hall to play basketball with room fourteen. We learn skills about passing the ball, dribbling the ball and shooting the ball. After that we had a game of basketball. In my team was Howard, Neo, Minhje, Kore lee and me. My team was against Frankie’s team. Mr Marks threw the ball up and me and Frankie jumped up and tried to hit the ball to our team mates. Frankie’s team had the ball first. Frankie’s team was dribbling the ball and passing the ball. When they passed the ball to Frankie he shot the ball and got a goal.
When Mr Marks threw the ball up again. Frankie and I jumped up and tried to hit the ball to our team mates. This time my team had the the ball. Neo, had the ball in our team. he passed the ball to me. I passed it to Howard and this time Howard shot it and got a goal. Sadly the bell rang and it was a draw. I felt happy because everyone had fun.

Siwmming

On Monday two weeks ago at 1 o clock we went swimming with room seventeen. One of the kids in room seventeen was guarding the crossing button while everyone went passed. When I was walking I heard rustling plastic bags. We got to the pools and I went through the door and smelt chlorine. I saw room 14 and 16 swimming in the big pool. First I got changed into my togs and got into the pool. Miss Garden told us to swim to the other side of the pool and I could touch the bottom of the pool. After that we did backstroke which I can’t do and diving and got out of the pool and got changed.

My holidays

On the first week of my holiday I stayed home with my mum dad and my brother and it was boring. My other two brothers went t my cousins house for the week.
On the second week I had much more fun. We went to the park with my mum, dad and my brother, it was awesome. On Friday my aunty took us to the mall to have dinner. But the best, best, best thing that I did was when we went to the movies. We saw ‘Fast and Furious Five’. I had never been to the movies before, I thought it was great and better than watching movies at home.

Tower

Yesterday Mr Marks split us into two groups. Number one stayed with Mr Marks and the other group went to room fourteen. In my group was Frankie, Esrah and Anthony. We were challenged to see who could make the highest tower. Our tower was the best one so far but Esra, Anthony and Frankie keep on touching it, so it fell over. It was made out of paper, stuck together with sellotape.

My Movie

This is a movie I made in term 1 which is 'All About Me'.

My Own Netbook

When I got my net book I was so happy. The best thing that I like doing on my net book is playing games. The other thing that I like to do is doing the word search. But the best, best, best thing is having free time. Every morning we go on to the class site to see what we are doing first.

Camp

Last week on Wednesday it was year 5 and 6 camp and it was the best time of my life.
On the last day of camp True Crew went to skate land. First we got our roller blades and put them on and went to skate. We played games like ball tigi. Then we had 5 more minutes to get out.
I felt happy because every body was happy.

Baseball with Cola

When it was Frankies turn he hit the ball all the way to the kindergarten. When I was waiting for my turn I was thinking where to hit the ball. Then I hit the ball where I wanted to hit it and I ran to first base. I felt happy because I made it to first base.

When it was our turn to field i was on base tow. Then it was anther person turn he hit the ball far like Frankie. After that we all had a turn. When the game was finish I felt happy because ever one
had hit.

Chocolate chip cookie

In the chocolate chip cookie there are little specks of sugar.My biscuit has little chocolate freckles like Miss Garden arms and legs. My chocolate biscuit is circular like an orange.

This Is Me

Lorenzo is in Year 5

It's 2011 and Lorenzo has his own blog.

Click here to see work from last year.