Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Jake The Swimmer

In the story jake dived into the pool and something was wrong.  The wall was moving away from him. after that he fate like he was droending. halfway so the coach had to save him and when he got out of the pool he was embrras. Then Jake thank him pilliot and lucky Mr Newman saved his life because he wouldn’t  challenge in the butterfly heat race.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lorenzo it is auri. I like your sorry abut jack the swimmer.