Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Jake The Swimmer

Jake was practising swimming for the heat  that was coming up and he had to get lots of training.  When he dived into the pool he had an problem the wall seem to be moving away from him. He keep swimming but it is still happening. Then when he made into the middle and he felt like he was drowning so Mr Newman had to saved him. He said lucky you saved me I  wouldn't  be competing in the semi finals that was coming up. The day was the day for the semi finals When he dived into the pool it was happening again he did what Emma said  Josh said Ben Pur and  Mrs Gerd and he put it altogether and became a winner.

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